I've gotta say: I've got my fingers crossed for that waterfall...
Also, it occurs to me late on Monday that I haven't mentioned a thing about the act breakdown for this story. As you may--or may not--recall, back at the beginning of this storyline, I said I was going to experiment with just letting the story unspool at its own pace, not worry about the act structure and all, and see how that worked out.
Well, it worked out with my brain giving me another five act story, each act being about 16 pages long:
Act 1:[401] [402] [403] [404] [405] [406] [407] [408] [409] [410] [411] [412] [413] [414] [415] [416]
This, then, is the start of Act 5, and the story looks like it'll be finishing about page 480, so this'll be about 16 pages, too. I am apparently all about the structure...
Act 2:[417] [418] [419] [420] [421] [422] [423] [424] [425] [426] [427] [428] [429] [430] [431]
Act 3:[432] [433] [434] [435] [436] [437] [438] [439] [440] [441] [442] [443] [444] [445] [446] [447]
Act 4:[448] [449] [450] [451] [452] [453] [454] [455] [456] [457] [458] [459] [460] [461] [462] [463]