Yeesh. When it gets to the point where even I don't know what Howlett's talking about, then it's time to change scenes.
On a purely technical note, though, that second page gave me more trouble when it came to scanning and getting the colors right than I've had in a long time. After an hour and a half of monkeying with it, I've decided that anyone who's reading a comic I'm drawing isn't likely to be all that concerned with the artistic side of things. So up it goes as it is.
Thirty - The Way of All Flesh